For a persuasive argument you need:
# to pick a side
# have a strong starting statement. The end sentence should be the same.
# have three good points to back up your argument.
Here are some of our ideas.
You should not be allowed to bring toys to school because…
You might lose them
You might get them stolen
You might steal them
So should not be allowed to bring toys to School
By Bryn
Children should not be allowed to stay up as long as they
like because…
They might stay up late and watch TV
They might miss their sports games
They might be late for school
So therefore children should not be allowed to stay up as
long as they like
By Brooke
Children should do homework because they will never get
clever or smart. And when they are
adults they want to know how to spell.
You learn your words because you do homework so therefore we should do
homework.
By Harper
Children should do homework because it helps us do our
learning. So we can do our maths goals
and our maths sheet and our spelling and our reading. Our reading eggs to get it to helps us
read. You get better so we go home and
do our homework. So we should do our
homework.
By Leyton
You are not allowed to bring toys to school because…
Bullies would steal them.
They would get lost.
Bullies would break them.
So therefore I don’t think you should be allowed to bring
toys to school.
By Finn
Children should do homework because…
You will get really smart
You have to know reading.
You can spell to when you go to work.
You will know more things about the ting in the book.
Children should do homework.
By Jayden
I think you should be allowed to play sport in the rain
because…
You’re supposed to get muddy in sport.
It’s really AWESOME in the rain.
You can slide.
So therefore you should be allowed to play sport in the
rain.
By Baxter
You should do your homework because you learn more and you
learn maths and reading and more so therefore I think we should do homework
By Toby
Children should not be allowed to stay up as long as they
like because…
At school you might fall to sleep or won’t do your work or
be grumpy.
Children should not be allowed to stay up as long as they
like.
By Ned
Children should be allowed to do homework because you will
be smart. You will get good. You will be smart and do good work. Children should be allowed to do homework
because you will be smart.
By Lucus
Children should be allowed to stay up as long as they like because…
They can have fun.
They can take time at doing stuff and they might get grumpy
about not staying up as long as they like.
So children should be allowed to stay up as long as they like.
By Jolie
Children should do homework because…
When we are older we are not going to be at school.
You can not know everything.
What will be invented in the future?
So therefore children should do homework.
By Preston
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