Tuesday, 19 May 2015

More stories....

What are we doing in these "show don't tell stories"?

In front of me are the ingredients for something that is really tasty. The ingredients that in front of are a mug with boiling water, something that involves Cadbury and some Milk. I mix them into cups and then I stirred them. Then I took a lllooonnnggg sip. It was delicious!
By Eli
I had a cup in my hand. I put some light coloured brown powder in it. Then I poured some milk in it. It made a bubble noise “bubble!!!” Then I poured some hot water from the jug . Then it makes a very yum drink.
By Baxter
I am in the Kitchen. I get the lid off the top of the tin. I get my spoon I scoop some glimmering, shining, brown Powder, I put it in my mug.  I get the boiling water and I put the boiling water in with the brown powder.  I mix them together with the spoon. I put the milk together then mixed them again until the powder was gone.  It was delicious.
By Brooke
One day I was in the kitchen. I looked on the bench and there was a tin of light brown powder. I saw a spoon on the bench, I put the brown powder in a cup. The cup was see through. I put the spoon in and started to stir. It went round and round. I looked at it I got dizzy and I nearly rolled over. I got the cup and started to drink it. It was empty! Oh no! it was the wrong one. 
By Toby
I get a piece of white bread. I get a jar of peanut butter. I get another piece of bread. I get a knife I put it in the butter and scoop the butter out. I scoop the peanut butter out and put it on top of the butter. I put the other piece of bread on top . I eat it. It was delicious. I made another one.  
Harlem
I got two pieces of bread and got a jar of jam – raspberry  and I got a knife and scooped out the jam and put it on the bread.  I put it on the other piece of bread and got both of them together and made the yum bread food.  Then I will make another one and this will be yummy, then the other one.

Jimace

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