Read these show don't tell stories and see if you can figure out what we are eating.

I got an oval green fruit thing. I put the green oval fruit thing on a plate and a spoon. I got a knife. I put it on the green oval fruit thing. I put the knife back and forward until it’s in two pieces. I get one and eat the white or cream colour inside.

By Harlem.

One day I went to my tree. I got and oval green thing. I put it on a plate then got a knife and cut the top and got a spoon and went around it. It was a fruit and I put it in my mouth. I ate a little bit at a time. I said “m m m m m “.

By Preston.

I had a tree. It had green stuff on it. It fell off the tree onto the ground. I picked it up and….. went inside. I got ….. a knife, splish the juice went from the fruit. It was yummy so I got another piece.

Toby G.

I have a green oval shape. Then I put the knife in. Then get a spoon and eat it. Mmm yum yum! I put the skin in the bin.

By Liam L.

I get an oval with bumps. It’s green and in my hand. In my other hand there’s a knife. “Cut, cut, cut, snap” goes the oval with bumps. I put it on a plate. I get a spoon and put the knife on a table nearby. I get out the white colour inside. I put it in my mouth. “Yuck”, I say. I get a drink of water “all better” I say. I go and get some more of this fruit outside “whomp, whomp, whomp” goes the sound of the oval with bumps “ sigh this is tiring”. I ask myself “Yes it is”. I go inside and show my mother.

By Finn.

When I was at home I had this oval green thing. It was a fruit, it’s in my hand. I put it on a plate. I had a knife in my hand. I split it into two pieces. I got my spoon and twirled it and put the spoon in my mouth. I took a big bit out of it, and swallowed it. I took the other green oval fruit and got my spoon again and took a humongous bite out of it. Then I swallowed it. It went down my throat and in my digestive system. All done.  I enjoyed it.

By Zak E.

I am holding something that is a fruit. It is bumpy and green! When you cut it open with a knife you can see a cream colour inside it. Some of them are hard, some of them are squishy! You definitely need a spoon for it. Some people bite the top and squeeze it. I put it in my mouth and it wasn’t good.

By Eli.

I have a green bumpy oval in my hand. I take a bite off the top of the fruit. I squeezed the two sides and some creamy white stuff came out then I eat it.  It’s bigger than an orange. It was delicious.

By Brooke.

Something is an oval shape, and it’s green. It’s a fruit. You hold it in one hand. You get a plate. You put it in the plate. You get a knife and you cut it in the middle. You get your spoon and you turn the spoon around. You put the fruit on your spoon. You put it in your mouth.

By Leyton.